Tents (I have known)
take off imminent above Tintagel
canvas cracks, blast attacks
can we lash it down?
first day burn in St Tropez
sweat hot grit, amber-lit
abrasion stripping pink from brown.
buffalo-licks on Masai plains
shadow tongues, bubbling lungs
breath held silence – choke it down.
flat foot nocturne camel train
dune-shod stumble, powdered rumble
looming jinns a-flicker brown.
nebula glinting midnight eyes
arcing ink, laser wink
so we spangle, charcoal drown.
flaps and rustles, half-heard jostles
memories strung on guy-rope brown.
great dance in your words…and it sounds like quite teh adventures as well…i have known a few tents in my day…i lived in one for a year once…
Thanks, Brian… yes a tented reflective…. A year in a tent? Wow…
Wonderful piece. the sound and the rhythm help make the choice of words perfect.
Thanks, Carl. Glad you enjoyed it.