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September 15, 2011

Aslant,
unanchored, lie;
miscue, misfire, mistaken.
Devoid of eye-lock, laughing breath:
disarm.

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8 Comments
  1. line three in partic is great. The alliteration is very effective

    • Thanks for dropping in again Luke, always good to hear your thoughts… I could have gone on with the mis – examples of miscommunications… thank heavens for the syllabic constraints… 🙂

  2. That is the thing about lies, they are unanchored, loose and dangerous.

    Well said! Very original, this.

    • Thanks Jannie… certainly plenty of scope for virtual miscommunication… but I think we’ve done Ok here… 🙂

  3. miscue, misfire, mistaken… miscommunication (as you wrote Jannie). great lines that swoop me in and create the feeling of being unanchored…

  4. cute, powerful insights.

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